Mrs Elizabeth Darcy

Background : In the year 7196, the Milky Way galaxy is rebuilding itself after a devastating inter-species technological war. Only a few planets remain in any way habitable. Hundreds of ...

Name: Hector Rogers (“Hat”) Gender: Male Age(15- 19): 19 Class: Middle Race: Dreanic, instrument: Harmonica Weapon of choice: 8” kitchen knife. Personality: Angry most of the time. Hates and fea

Am I too late to jump in? Middle class Dreanic?

Sad... Badly this intentional? You're distracted or crying so you hammer this out without paying attention to capitalisation, &c? Or maybe it's supposed to be sort of in texting style? ...

Okay! Welcome to YWS! I like this poem. The love in it is fairly unsullied and it definitely provokes a reaction. I can see her in my head, and I'm ...

` I’d rather be friends with you than love anyone else. I’d rather just chat with you than emote to anyone else. I love to see you; even your face ...

---------- I always want to be around you. Wherever you go, I will follow. Whenever you need me, I’ll be there. I will protect you. I cannot go away from ...

A question that has been bugging me: Why does everyone like Erik (Phantom) so much? Why does everyone think Christine should end up with him? Erik doesn't hold a candle ...

Rough rough rough. Absolutely open to suggestions (I mean that!) Also, don't take too seriously. It's more like an eye-roll than a rant. :) ---- I open a Word Document, ...

Awesome. I wrote something like this once!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE the Screwtape Letters. LOVE them. They are AWESOME. Although this obviously isn't Lewis, it has several extremely accurate points ...

I'm probably not well enough known either...can I be a top hat in a corner? :)

:D I love the last few lines...but who are you talking about, and what is he doing? I'm glad he proved not to be a coward...but what was she asking ...

Oh my! First off, very consistent wording. Nicely done. :) (The poem looks very pretty!) Okay, the attraction here is interesting. Apparently she's a total jerk? Except for frilly things ...

:) Meeeh, 93's not all that. Although I do know a lot more about how to argue than I did... Love it. Take me with you when you go and ...

Hi! Mostly punctuation here. Good poem...a little hard to understand. (I'm being all Philistine at the moment. Don't worry.) I will be brief because there's not really much to edit. ...